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Reverie

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I am in love with the sky
Not just another world up there
I climb on my roof
The universe is flipped

Not just another world up there
Hot shingles, cold shadows
The universe is flipped
Snug corners and vast expanses

Hot shingles, cold shadows
Alone is not lonely
Snug corners and vast expanses
I create peace within this space

Alone is not lonely
Lean back, take breath
I create peace within this space
The sky has stolen my heart

Lean back, take breath
Thousand words? None necessary
The sky has stolen my heart
And I am euphoric alive

Thousand words? None necessary
I climb on my roof
And I am euphoric alive
I am in love with the sky
Aaaaaand two years later: my first submission! I love this piece, which I don't often say about my work. And I love climbing on my roof. I need to do it more often. : )

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This is a pantoum. The rules are specific and rather strict. They're really hard to do...
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Adonael's avatar
Wow...just...speechless! It was very captivating.